Posted by the author on GoDiscussions.com (corrections in 2nd Ed.)
p. 63: White has 51 points, Black has 46. With komi of 6 ½ points it is an 11 ½ point victory for White. Black's mistakes in the opening were countered by White’s passive play along the left side and in the upper-right corner. But after the "interesting move" of , White took the upper-right corner and Black thought that defending the moyo was the most important move. This allowed an invasion at the top because Black’s corner was so weak.
Posted by the author on Sensei's Library.
p. 109: The text of the Variation sidebar should say, "Black dies."