chapter1 Eyes
--Erik stared at the goban a glint of happiness in his eye his brother hadn't seen it yet it was still there, it seemed to be etched in the goban itself. "You're screwed now Alex", Erik said as his hand cascaded upon the goban. CLACK, Erik's black slate hit the board with such a force that the window panes rattled. "Was that really necessary", Alex said a grin forming on his face. Erik looked up, "What do you mean necessary You're screwed it's as simple as that."
--Alex was silent which surprised Erik but what was more surprising was the smug look on his face. Alex put his arm up in the air smiling, "You lose." Erik stared in shock what the hell had happened, had Alex really won. It was true the game was as good as over there was nothing left to do but resign, either way his brother made over fourty points.
--Alex looked shocked, "How did you?" but Erik just couldn't get it out.
--"It's very simple your style is wonderful your play is excellent, there is just one major flaw."
--"And that would be?",Erik questioned. "Your greed", Alex paused "It is a fog, but just a light one barely there barely noticeable. Barely noticeable yet still it blinds you and you let it, you truly are a fool."
--"WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE GIVING ME SUCH A LECTURE!?", Erik's eyes lolled violently in his head. "I'M THE FIVE PRO AND YOU, YOUR ONLY A LOUSY TWO DAN."
--Alex looked taken aback, "Calm down it's only a game we could play another round or something if you want it was a mistake anyone could make." Erik didn't care he wasn't paying any attention to Alex at all he was much too angry. Suddenly Erik chuked the goban into the wall stones raining upon Alex. "I'll take your rematch", Erik said.
Do you want editing? This really needs help. '"Your screwed now Alex"' ... 'Alex said a grin forming' ... 'you mean necessary Your screwed it's as simple as that'.
PatG: Actually it's You're screwed, your being the possessive, you're being the contraction of you are.
Kuolema: Yeah, I can't believe so many people make the mistake between Your and You're.
Proto: Your totally right. I share you're frustrations completely.
DrStraw The author of this page should read a good book on punctuation before trying to write any more.
Bill: Oh, let's go back to the time of free form orthography. ;-) Malory (Le Morte D'Arthur) spelled his own name differently: both Malory and Maleore. ;-)